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1 year ago
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Poeminha
#Desafio 365 days (027 of 365)
I've been reading so many light poems around here with sweet, sweet words to read... And sometimes I find my poems a little shrewd, pretentious, full of "techniques" and academic structures...
Oh, James, does it hurt to make a cute poem, funny guy?
Well, it costs... But sometimes I can. So, today, I'm going to post one that I always thought was good and easy to read, and that even became music (if I can, put here too).
Poeminha
If I were an angel, I would guide you.
By a road that would end
In a beautiful destiny, which would unite us;
If I were an angel, I'd bring you to me.
If it was a rose, my God, I would.
Make your home graceful, so;
And when he looked at me, then he would ask
So you'd look at me more.
And if it was the sun, for you, I'd come in.
In your dark room, like a cherub,
To lull your sleep to a new day,
And tell you, in a dream, to like me.
But nothing is me but a cold one
Remembrance of love, bad longing,
Who waits for the moment when, by magic,
You fall in love with me at once.
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Boy, following you now because I only got time and I'm still adapting to the site kkkk but it was worth coming in just to read/hear this wonder Ti. What a beautiful thing, congratulations! Now I have the music in my head <3 Awesome!!!
Too delicious!
I'm sorry, James, but stop! You're a poet, a writer, an author, and I don't know how many wonderful things are... so talented. He writes in various styles, nor does it come with “sisudo, prepotent... Etc...” Pq in your many writing techniques, you have no idea how good it is to read you. I speak from experience!