#Desafio of 365 days, day 43:
LOOKING FOR BETA READERS!
As the project follows with Very Blood and Little Garlic, which had the plot of the next chapters decided today, I also want to focus on the other project I want to take out of the drawer this year: No ice, please.
So I'm looking for readers to betarate the first chapters of this project and give me their opinions.
In case you wanted to know more about the story, I've posted around here. What's up?
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#Desafio of 365 days, day 42:
I'd like to use this space to make it very clear that I'm bisexual.
And bisexual as it says in the ancient manifesto: men, women, and all that is among it [free translation]. Not this whole thing they told you about the difference between pan and bi to try to paint a transphobic bisexuality.
I say this because the first and only feedback I received about Too Much Blood and Little Garlic was that it was clear that it would be a love story between two men.
First of all, it's not between two men, it's between a vampire and a sweet coconut. Second I want you, who don't like stories with LGBTQIA+ characters in focus, to know that all my stories will have LGBTQIA+ characters.
I hope I've made it clear, but to make sure I leave a very bisexual dragon here.
I'd like to use this space to make it very clear that I'm bisexual.
And bisexual as it says in the ancient manifesto: men, women, and all that is among it [free translation]. Not this whole thing they told you about the difference between pan and bi to try to paint a transphobic bisexuality.
I say this because the first and only feedback I received about Too Much Blood and Little Garlic was that it was clear that it would be a love story between two men.
First of all, it's not between two men, it's between a vampire and a sweet coconut. Second I want you, who don't like stories with LGBTQIA+ characters in focus, to know that all my stories will have LGBTQIA+ characters.
I hope I've made it clear, but to make sure I leave a very bisexual dragon here.
#Desafio of 365 days, day 41:
Do you also make playlists for your projects?
For the books of The Legacy of Esser, I made a playlist for each character, something that conveyed each person's "vibe".
For No Ice, Please (which I will finalize this year) the playlist is much more related to the story than to the characters.
Anyway, here's a link to the Iceless playlist, please on Spotify. Would you like to see other lists of other projects?
Abrir link
Do you also make playlists for your projects?
For the books of The Legacy of Esser, I made a playlist for each character, something that conveyed each person's "vibe".
For No Ice, Please (which I will finalize this year) the playlist is much more related to the story than to the characters.
Anyway, here's a link to the Iceless playlist, please on Spotify. Would you like to see other lists of other projects?
Abrir link
#Desafio of 365 days, day 40:
The first chapter of Very Blood and Little Garlic is here!
With a day delay due to technical problems - I was unable to export the file as epub and the site did not accept the PDF file.
But now, in the dead of night, you can embark on the story of Valmiro, the vampire you hated being a vampire.
#MuitoSangueEPoucoAlho
The first chapter of Very Blood and Little Garlic is here!
With a day delay due to technical problems - I was unable to export the file as epub and the site did not accept the PDF file.
But now, in the dead of night, you can embark on the story of Valmiro, the vampire you hated being a vampire.
#MuitoSangueEPoucoAlho
#Desafio of 365 days, day 39:
It's morning!
Now that you know the characters that will appear most in the first chapters, tomorrow I will post the first chapter of the story Very Blood and Little Garlic!
The first three chapters will be free. After that, each chapter will have a symbolic price, only to motivate me to keep writing.
I really hope you like that story.
It's morning!
Now that you know the characters that will appear most in the first chapters, tomorrow I will post the first chapter of the story Very Blood and Little Garlic!
The first three chapters will be free. After that, each chapter will have a symbolic price, only to motivate me to keep writing.
I really hope you like that story.
#Desafio of 365 days, day 38:
Meet Alberto.
Alberto Bombasin - Bertô for older friends, Beto for younger ones - says he was born as soon as his parents arrived in Brazil, coming from Italy. He was the first in the family to speak Portuguese and the best adapted to Brazil, especially at the pace of São Paulo.
He enjoyed youth on the night of São Paulo, having fun and commenting on all the mistakes his most primitive instincts forced him to make. Until she met Celeste, and fell madly in love with the young woman full of mystical ideas.
He got married and used all his persistence and stubbornness to make some money and open a restaurant before they raised his family.
Today he uses the restaurant to give young people a chance to identify that "something else" he always had, even if they try to keep it a secret.
#MuitoSangueEPoucoAlho
Meet Alberto.
Alberto Bombasin - Bertô for older friends, Beto for younger ones - says he was born as soon as his parents arrived in Brazil, coming from Italy. He was the first in the family to speak Portuguese and the best adapted to Brazil, especially at the pace of São Paulo.
He enjoyed youth on the night of São Paulo, having fun and commenting on all the mistakes his most primitive instincts forced him to make. Until she met Celeste, and fell madly in love with the young woman full of mystical ideas.
He got married and used all his persistence and stubbornness to make some money and open a restaurant before they raised his family.
Today he uses the restaurant to give young people a chance to identify that "something else" he always had, even if they try to keep it a secret.
#MuitoSangueEPoucoAlho
#Desafio of 365 days, day 37:
Meet Stella.
The restaurant's maitre is one of the youngest maitres in São Paulo, despite its long years working in the restaurant. She began as a saloon attendant the same day her childhood best friend, Raul, began in the kitchen. She learned all about the operation of the restaurant and specialized in oenology and harmonisation with the help of her father, the owner of the restaurant.
Despite sharing her father's interest, Stella is much more like her mother, with whom she spends long hours studying tarot and other oracular arts. The rest of the time, he prefers to spend looking for new drinks to meet or try to accompany Raul in his training.
She believes that there is a certain magic in providing a memorable experience at a dinner, and she does everything to make sure that the restaurant - which will one day be hers - is filled with this magic.
#MuitoSangueEPoucoAlho #embreve
Meet Stella.
The restaurant's maitre is one of the youngest maitres in São Paulo, despite its long years working in the restaurant. She began as a saloon attendant the same day her childhood best friend, Raul, began in the kitchen. She learned all about the operation of the restaurant and specialized in oenology and harmonisation with the help of her father, the owner of the restaurant.
Despite sharing her father's interest, Stella is much more like her mother, with whom she spends long hours studying tarot and other oracular arts. The rest of the time, he prefers to spend looking for new drinks to meet or try to accompany Raul in his training.
She believes that there is a certain magic in providing a memorable experience at a dinner, and she does everything to make sure that the restaurant - which will one day be hers - is filled with this magic.
#MuitoSangueEPoucoAlho #embreve
#Desafio of 365 days, day 36:
Meet Jaciara.
Where words are rare, looks talk a lot. This is how to live with Jaciara, who prefers to talk, saving her charming voice for the closest.
She speaks little of herself, especially of her past. He moved from the Amazon because he did not feel safe, but never explained how the city where he lived could be more dangerous than São Paulo. When you're alone, you sing quietly to the birds that land on the wires and tiles near your house.
She interviewed a new assistant in the absence of Chef Raul, and hired him, despite having no experience. She gave Valmiro the same chance they gave her...
#MuitoSangueEPoucoAlho #embreve
Meet Jaciara.
Where words are rare, looks talk a lot. This is how to live with Jaciara, who prefers to talk, saving her charming voice for the closest.
She speaks little of herself, especially of her past. He moved from the Amazon because he did not feel safe, but never explained how the city where he lived could be more dangerous than São Paulo. When you're alone, you sing quietly to the birds that land on the wires and tiles near your house.
She interviewed a new assistant in the absence of Chef Raul, and hired him, despite having no experience. She gave Valmiro the same chance they gave her...
#MuitoSangueEPoucoAlho #embreve
#Desafio of 365 days, day 36:
Meet Evandro.
Evandro - or Van, as he prefers - was born and raised in Osasco until, when he was only 17, his parents were murdered in an unresolved crime with peculiar circumstances: both with necks torn and killed by exsanguination.
He went to live with his grandmother in Tatuapé and became obsessed with personal defense, trained several martial arts in order to be always prepared and not suffer the same fate as his parents. When he graduated from high school, he couldn't think of a career other than being a wrestling instructor.
Now he works in a restaurant so he can pay for the last few months until he gets his black belt in Tae Kwon Do and can work in a gym.
#MuitoSangueEPoucoAlho #Serie #EmBreve
Meet Evandro.
Evandro - or Van, as he prefers - was born and raised in Osasco until, when he was only 17, his parents were murdered in an unresolved crime with peculiar circumstances: both with necks torn and killed by exsanguination.
He went to live with his grandmother in Tatuapé and became obsessed with personal defense, trained several martial arts in order to be always prepared and not suffer the same fate as his parents. When he graduated from high school, he couldn't think of a career other than being a wrestling instructor.
Now he works in a restaurant so he can pay for the last few months until he gets his black belt in Tae Kwon Do and can work in a gym.
#MuitoSangueEPoucoAlho #Serie #EmBreve
#Desafio of 365 days, day 35:
Meet Van.
At the age of 12, Evandro received the terrible news that his parents had been murdered, their bodies found in a river with their necks torn apart, and the cause of death marked as exsanguination. On that day he had to move from Osasco, where he grew up, to the Tatuapé, in the East of São Paulo, to live with his grandmother. He carried with him the nickname given by his mother: Van.
He decided he wouldn't let what happened to his parents happen to him, and he took a big interest in martial arts.
When he graduated, the only career he wanted to pursue was teaching martial arts to children. So you got a job in a restaurant to pay for the last few months until you got Tae Kwon Do's black belt and got a job as an instructor...
#MuitoSangueEPoucoAlho #embreve
Meet Van.
At the age of 12, Evandro received the terrible news that his parents had been murdered, their bodies found in a river with their necks torn apart, and the cause of death marked as exsanguination. On that day he had to move from Osasco, where he grew up, to the Tatuapé, in the East of São Paulo, to live with his grandmother. He carried with him the nickname given by his mother: Van.
He decided he wouldn't let what happened to his parents happen to him, and he took a big interest in martial arts.
When he graduated, the only career he wanted to pursue was teaching martial arts to children. So you got a job in a restaurant to pay for the last few months until you got Tae Kwon Do's black belt and got a job as an instructor...
#MuitoSangueEPoucoAlho #embreve